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A collaboration over too much coffee.
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19 October, 2004

Inspired!

held my breath for a minute,
was there more?

of her life?

like tendrils,
she crawled upon my chest,
words, nails, poetry.

my dreams
are too endless
she exhaled.

and some of that ether
mingled in,
some wafted away
as air.

what remained
i captured.

held my breath
for a minute,

was there more?

(C) Sunil R Nair
19/10/2004

(I borrowed a stanza from Manisha Lakhe's poem For you which appeared in this blog. Had to write this poem, my first in some months)

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6 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

awesome!! passionate... so much said in few words..

19 October, 2004 12:42  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

awesome!! passionate... so much said in few words..

19 October, 2004 12:44  
Blogger annie said...

more power to the inspired! :)
i love it when one poem sets off another

19 October, 2004 13:26  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Beautiful...the passion and the inspiration shine through...especially liked the third stanza (if I can call it that).

-Anil
http://arthedains.rediffblogs.com

19 October, 2004 14:17  
Blogger rats said...

amazing sunil... truly one of your best

19 October, 2004 17:11  
Blogger Dilfiza Khalfey said...

Its Beautiful, Awesome, Amazing and one of the best i have read,
Wow my mind is refreshed.

19 October, 2004 18:14  

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