Surrender...
like a pinch of vermilion
at the crescent
where your hair lords
over your forehead.
Forever…
© Dan Husain
November, 2005
Labels: poetry
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2 Comments:
being the ignorant sod that i am i am probably missing this being a tanka or a haiku or something but i do know this is both witty and intelligent.
another two things that i am in short supply of!!!!
sounds familiar. Hindi film song/dialogue perhaps... "Mai tumhari maang kaa sindoor ban jaoon"
What's going on Dan?
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