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05 February, 2006

Surrender...

I wish to spread
like a pinch of vermilion
at the crescent
where your hair lords
over your forehead.

Forever…

© Dan Husain
November, 2005

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Blogger Cocaine Jesus said...

being the ignorant sod that i am i am probably missing this being a tanka or a haiku or something but i do know this is both witty and intelligent.

another two things that i am in short supply of!!!!

06 February, 2006 19:51  
Blogger Rajendra Pradhan said...

sounds familiar. Hindi film song/dialogue perhaps... "Mai tumhari maang kaa sindoor ban jaoon"

What's going on Dan?

10 February, 2006 22:14  

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