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A collaboration over too much coffee.
coffee and pen

19 November, 2004

Intricate Images

Blank pages, white curios
Clever fonts, simple sunshine
Eager hunger, blue wonder
Angry lines, limpid sounds
Polite panic, smooth tonic

A collection of intricate images
Hung out to dry
Under the benign heat
Of my innocent imagination




Blogger roxa said...

imagination will comes here
I will be white as the best paper
that will help my black mind
fulfill my hungry heart

20 November, 2004 17:46  
Blogger raindanseuse said...

First, I'll have to say bluntly that I don't really like your poem in its entirety. Yet, it manages to reach out to me. Whenever I'm faced with blank paper I follow this exercise: I write down random thoughts and then as I keep going those thoughts turn into something flowing and connected. I must say you've somehow captured that exercise poetically and the second verse is worded so tastefully that I couldn't resist commenting despite myself.

21 November, 2004 00:42  
Blogger Anil said...

roxa: that is so appropriate!

raindanseuse: thank you for your frank comment....this poem was something along the tangential lines of your exercise...only unintentionally so :)

21 November, 2004 18:01  
Blogger Max Babi said...

The second para is stunning,
and on the whole the poem does
read well.
Good work -keep posting !

Cheers !

22 November, 2004 09:54  

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