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A collaboration over too much coffee.
coffee and pen

05 December, 2004

for pia

i remember
the nights
i stayed awake
my arms aching
from holding you

i still
stay awake
all night
my arms aching
from wanting
to hold you



Anonymous Anonymous said...

wish someone would feel like that about me...

05 December, 2004 22:39  
Blogger Max Babi said...

welcome back rats,
with a bang ! wonderful piece
of simple keep posting.

cheers !

05 December, 2004 22:56  
Blogger annie said...

ratna... have been missing you. SO glad to see you back here. more, more!!

06 December, 2004 13:55  
Blogger zigzackly said...

So glad to see you posting again. Lovely poem.

The 11th is just a few days away.

06 December, 2004 18:45  
Blogger scribe said...

Was that a mother in those lines? It sounded like there was. I had a parallel one building up within me this evening - and then I found this. Wonderful:)

06 December, 2004 21:16  

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