Careless.
A sudden bloom
of crimson tide
in every
heartbreak
that
I hide.
yet
Your
Impassive
icy eyes
won'tever say
I'll stay.
____________
Your
impervious
opaque eyes
careless
of every
heartbreak
sown.
Yet
the seared
heart sighs
don't go
just
love me
lie to me
once more.
of crimson tide
in every
heartbreak
that
I hide.
yet
Your
Impassive
icy eyes
won'tever say
I'll stay.
____________
Your
impervious
opaque eyes
careless
of every
heartbreak
sown.
Yet
the seared
heart sighs
don't go
just
love me
lie to me
once more.
Labels: poetry
Selected by Pincushion |
15:37 |
6 Comments:
Have read this before, have said this before: this is exquisite in its lyrical simplicity! Love every word!
this is magical... i am smitten :-)
Carelessly I browsed in .... & you overwhelm me. This is beautiful.. & strong & melodius.
I'll stay. - Anita
While the prosody of this poem is great, but the absolutely brilliant thing about this poem is the truth in it - how sad it is when, looking back in retrospect, one can't see how one could have gone on and on even with a deception continuing...
The simplycity of the piece adds to its aura of depth...beautiful!
It is simple true deep and wonderful.
It aint a lie
Oh yes I say
i'll stay
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