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25 February, 2005

Careless.

A sudden bloom
of crimson tide
in every
heartbreak
that
I hide.
yet
Your
Impassive
icy eyes
won'tever say
I'll stay.
____________
Your
impervious
opaque eyes
careless
of every
heartbreak
sown.
Yet
the seared
heart sighs
don't go
just
love me
lie to me
once more.

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6 Comments:

Blogger SPECKLED_BAND said...

Have read this before, have said this before: this is exquisite in its lyrical simplicity! Love every word!

25 February, 2005 17:39  
Blogger Dan Husain said...

this is magical... i am smitten :-)

26 February, 2005 10:30  
Blogger scribe said...

Carelessly I browsed in .... & you overwhelm me. This is beautiful.. & strong & melodius.
I'll stay. - Anita

28 February, 2005 13:56  
Blogger khuto said...

While the prosody of this poem is great, but the absolutely brilliant thing about this poem is the truth in it - how sad it is when, looking back in retrospect, one can't see how one could have gone on and on even with a deception continuing...

01 March, 2005 04:29  
Blogger Prat said...

The simplycity of the piece adds to its aura of depth...beautiful!

01 March, 2005 14:59  
Blogger Ansh said...

It is simple true deep and wonderful.

It aint a lie
Oh yes I say
i'll stay

03 March, 2005 13:31  

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