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A collaboration over too much coffee.
coffee and pen

22 November, 2004

Disadvantage

Over the wires your sun-flecked laughter mocks,
its ripples teasing, "You deserve it!"
Pity I can't trap it in a box
and preserve it.

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3 Comments:

Blogger Arundhati said...

Lovely. Image and the briefness of it. Fleeting just as the feeling u have captured.

22 November, 2004 12:07  
Blogger manisha lakhe said...

aah... brevity! you serve it so beautifully upon this page!

22 November, 2004 12:59  
Blogger Geetanjali said...

The title is misleading, don't you think so? I must admit I expected something else when I saw the title - all said and done - I wish I could capture so much in so little!

28 November, 2004 22:06  

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