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14 December, 2004

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sailed in the same boat,
you reached the horizon,
then why do i , search for shores?

(its a personal comment made by someone special long ago, just thought of framing it up :-))
First timer on the Blog)

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3 Comments:

Blogger Max Babi said...

Hey, quite a good one for a beginner
amongst the folks here !
There's this brief and multi-meaning
quality to your lines, like Urdu shairs.
Keep it up, Fiza.
You're on the way....
cheers!

15 December, 2004 07:46  
Blogger sunilrnair said...

sailed in the same boat,
you reached the horizon,
then why do i , search for shores?

Fiza, aap ko saahil mil gaya, aur woh ab tak doobte hue sooraj ko dekh kar wahi samundar mein tair raha hai.

Horizons keep changing, atleast you got your shore!

Good one! hope to hear more.

15 December, 2004 09:25  
Blogger Geetanjali said...

So much asked, so much hinted in this little verse! It's beautiful...welcome aboard the Blog...ain't it simply wonderful?

16 December, 2004 15:07  

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