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A collaboration over too much coffee.
coffee and pen

27 March, 2006

Kiss of Phantasm

Dark clouds had gathered on the horizon even as she looked from her balcony. The ominous clouds without any caution, had stormed the cloudless, blue sky, without as much as offering it an opportunity to take guard or shelter its pristine body. She quietly watched the dark swirling, the rampant outrage.

He put his hand on her back that faced him. She felt the familiar touch, the stirring, and smiled to herself, as she turned towards him. Was he supposed to come back tonight, wondered she as her eyes caught the elfish look in his eyes.

“Heyy,” she muttered, playfully running her fingers through his hair. “Your hair’s grown, sweetie. You so need a haircut.”

“Hah, who cares?” He mumbled thickly as he drew her to him.

She slid closer, her lips on his, softly yet firmly, as she heard, rather felt the dazzling lightning kiss the clouds again in the illimitable skies.


Blogger Dan Husain said...

Lovely vignette! I like the longish hair bit. Gives a voice to this piece. :-)



27 March, 2006 12:01  
Blogger Arthur Quiller Couch said...

Danielle Steele would be proud. If that's the right word.

27 March, 2006 16:24  
Blogger Blue Athena said...

Dan: Hmm. Just wanted to keep this short and yet play a bit with the characters. :)

Arthur: If I can get even one of those spinners out, I'll hop and skip. lol! :)

28 March, 2006 09:48  
Blogger Natasha said...

Vivid imagery. Loved the parting shot-ethereal:)

More pls...


28 March, 2006 18:10  

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