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A collaboration over too much coffee.
coffee and pen

02 April, 2011

CaPoWriMo 2.02


Blogger Shweta said...

Somehow I think this mightn't count as a villanelle- but I can derive much satisfaction from the attempt!

02 April, 2011 12:45  
Blogger Ozymandias said...

here's my attempt:

(It's in the form, it follows the rules, but I'm not saying it is a villanelle.)

02 April, 2011 13:45  
Blogger nutty said... Here's mine- on cricket! Wrote it in our batting, 39th over

02 April, 2011 22:19  
Anonymous shrutanne said...

Why did you go?

I am sick with fear

I want you to know.

It cannot be so

Eyes fill with bitter tears

Why did you go?

How do I express my woe

It is not a trifle mere

I want you to know.

In vain I cry hello hello

I cannot find you, far or near

Why did you go?

My heart aches with sorrow

Without you, my world is drear

I want you to know.

You will not answer, No?

I wish you would hear

Why did you go?

I want you to know.

04 April, 2011 11:26  
Anonymous Dheera Kitchlu said...

Talkative, curly
Bouncing, laughing, achieving
A balm for the hurting heart

10 April, 2011 19:43  

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