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A collaboration over too much coffee.
coffee and pen

24 October, 2004

Listen

Listen
to my whispers,
electric streaks
tearing across a deaf sky

an inscrutable universe
vibrating knowingly

nothingness
dissolving into whorls
of possibilities...

(c) Max Babi

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Blogger Pragya said...

I really loved this, read it over and over again, especially in light of the lesson in poetry appreciation from you yesterday! This was really beautiful.

24 October, 2004 04:18  
Blogger Max Babi said...

Tks Pragya,
We need more focused readers like you !
Keep expressing your reactions-
that may help other new kids on the block...

24 October, 2004 09:15  
Blogger Anil said...

Beautiful...I love the imagery...like Pragya before ended up reading it again and again!

25 October, 2004 02:17  

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