Paper Boats
And drenched by rain,
I floated paper boats.
Into the waters,
Pencilling in my feelings to you.
You were young too.
Too young to notice
The words on the paper boat
You just used a stick
To shove my boat
Into the swirling drains.
How you laughed at my rage.
But when you grew up.
Grew up just a bit,
You too once wrote on paper
Carefully folding it into a boat
Floated it to me in the rain.
I was foolish, very foolish
I kept your boat.
Rains had washed away
The ink you used, dear,
But I can still feel
Your hand over the paper.
Labels: poetry
5 Comments:
Manisha, this is the stuff of tears...and I admit unashamedly that I couldn't keep my eyes dry.
Very nice, Manisha. Very, very nice.
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This is so beautiful...the concentrated emotion in the last stanza leaves one overwhelmed.
The childhood game of making paper boats and floating them in puddles gels perfectly with the innocence of young love - you draw the emotions like a skilled artist Manisha.
wah! wah! wah!
arjun
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