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A collaboration over too much coffee.
coffee and pen

07 December, 2004

Snap shots

Two left feet.
But dances in the rain.
Just for me.

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Suggestion in his eyes,
Laughter in his voice,
I blush.

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You're with others
across the room.
Still I tremble.

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Hear the storm
Within my heart.
Do you still wish to rest?

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5 Comments:

Blogger Anil said...

Ah beautiful! Just loved the first and the last...had to read them a few times to feel the emotions behind them again and again. Me thinks brevity is your middle name :)

08 December, 2004 01:27  
Blogger zigzackly said...

"Two left feet" is fab. Makes the others look merely nice.

08 December, 2004 04:05  
Blogger zigzackly said...

"Two left feet" is fab. Makes the others look merely nice.

08 December, 2004 04:07  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

lrakhe San!
genki dai yo? haiku totemo implessive!
hehehe! love the last one, it rocks my boat at shore!
:)
arljun barli

08 December, 2004 18:49  
Blogger . : A : . said...

Strong fleeting images. I can see the two feet and the rain together.

11 December, 2004 15:02  

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