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A collaboration over too much coffee.
coffee and pen

07 December, 2004

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Catch the dying ray of sun
And swing out over the ocean
like Tarzan
While the water sprays your feet
And flying fish snap at your toes.
Swing out to the sliver of moon
Meet its wide smile with a bear hug,
outstretched arms
Then cast into the vast space around
A moon rock as easy as they come.
And if you follow its path
You'll see it leads to me:
tiny speck
Standing down below on earth
Just a stone's throw away



Anonymous Anonymous said...

such a beautiful happy poem!

07 December, 2004 19:14  
Blogger Max Babi said...

Sonia, indeed a happy poem
with pretty compelling imagery
-it is pictorial in nature...

cheers !

08 December, 2004 01:03  
Blogger scribe said...

Truly splendid. The thought and image itself is so vast and luminuous, and your words render it brilliantly. Thanks for this.

08 December, 2004 12:35  
Blogger Ubermensch said...

early morning coffee!!

08 December, 2004 12:59  
Blogger raindanseuse said...

Thanks everyone! Glad I could spread some happiness around.

13 December, 2004 00:34  

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