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31 January, 2005

Promises

I do.
I lie.
You too.
And we both wonder
Why fairytales
Don't come true.

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5 Comments:

Blogger Ami Titash said...

:) thats because fairytales are cast by a spell. The moment we try to touch them and make them real, the spell is broken.

excellent work alex. :)...and cool timing too.

31 January, 2005 14:30  
Blogger Dan Husain said...

hum ko maloom hai jannat ki haqeeqat lekin
dil ke behlaane ko ghalib yeh khayaal acha hai

31 January, 2005 15:43  
Blogger julieunplugged said...

Perfect poem.

01 February, 2005 22:29  
Blogger Geetanjali said...

Brilliant it is...a believer in fairy tales while clinging onto the wisps of reality that prevent evil ppl with sledge-hammers from crashing in on my optimism, I can't help but nod at your sagacious verse!

03 February, 2005 09:14  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

This sparse -- yet says so much. One question, do you think adding an "and" before "you too" might improve the rhythm a little bit?

05 February, 2005 07:57  

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