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07 February, 2005

An Ocean in Myself...

I am an ocean in myself
Endless shores surround me
To gather treasures
I endow them
With every high tide...

As deep as you will delve
Into me, my soul & myself
You’ll find strength galore
Grit, you can’t ignore...

I am an ocean in myself
Endless triumphs and defeats
buried in my womb, they hide
I treasure them with care
As I need them during low tide...

Praneeta
24 July, 2004

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2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

loved every word of this piece.however bit uncomfortable with how it end....

susmita

08 February, 2005 10:22  
Blogger Max Babi said...

Hi Praneeta,
Nice to read your stuff here...
This is a good poem, very tightly
written, sort of a high potency
[or should it be "poetency"?] capsule.

Cheers!

Max

14 February, 2005 08:15  

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