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A collaboration over too much coffee.
coffee and pen

11 January, 2005

Morning Dreams

are mostly dreamy.

and then,
when the waves of passion,
leave you
like fire
after being,
drenched in rain,

will you still reach out
and say out loud ?
all the poetry,
you whispered ,
while your hair traced rippled,
lines on my face,
while your nails.
left marks
on pristineness of your whiteness?

are mostly dreamy.
From warmth seeping out
tiptoeing out to meet the sun,
from between the bodies.

What was that you said?
When I turned over and vanished,
in the dark haze of sleep.

Sunil R Nair, 10 Jan 2005



Blogger livinghigh said...

mmmm... very dreamy indeed! ;-)

11 January, 2005 14:40  
Blogger manisha lakhe said...

if there were a rating system with sighs, this would be way up there on 'wish i had written that list' (growing with every poem you write!) it!

11 January, 2005 16:44  
Blogger Anil said...

Love this poem Sunil...what I like about it is the almost voyeuristic-like peek I get into the romantic life of the couple in the poem. To repeat what Manisha said I wish I had written this!

11 January, 2005 23:29  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful and very visual like most of your poetry .
Loved the way it ended.


12 January, 2005 13:59  

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