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31 May, 2005

Summer Musings

I

only when summer sears earth
can water morph
in to rainclouds

i.i

only when fire chars mud
can wombs appear
ready to nurture



II

hot summer nights
stoke fires
of ashen passion

ii.ii

hot sand grains
sculpting stone
etching history eternity


III

sensual summer
slowly sears
sells simmering soul

iii.iii

sensual winds
sweat and salt
souls forever thirsty.

iv.iv

Divine is this lust
addiction and passion
chanting - hari hari - hari hari

(attempt at collaboration with Juno from Caferati)

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5 Comments:

Blogger livinghigh said...

and this morning, it rained in bbay!
yay!
:-), well, it was a drizzle, but who cares?!

01 June, 2005 10:23  
Blogger rats said...

this is by far one of your best stuff sunil

very s - tylish.

sells simmering soul ?

01 June, 2005 14:15  
Blogger bikkuri-bako said...

i love them all, except hari...hari.
brilliant!

01 June, 2005 15:46  
Blogger sunilrnair said...

was trying to link the sun and heat with devotion - sun sears and the rains are nirvana, the same kind attained by Bhakti saints who chant "hari hari" endlessly. Meera?

02 June, 2005 11:36  
Blogger bikkuri-bako said...

i made the connection.
the first two lines are beautiful. it is the third one with hari-hari' which left me a little bothered.
it seemed it didn't belong.
my 2 bits.
lovely work.

02 June, 2005 12:39  

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