Prophet
You called me prophet once, sat at my knees
while my fingers played through your hair,
healing: a Renaissance frieze.
At the time, the image seemed fair.
Now, a year since, its memory mocks,
a remembered dream vainly nursed.
Disgraced, the prophet’s back among the rocks,
locusts, wilderness, and thirst.
II
But in my wilderness I saw your own,
as hubris rode you like a demon:
when your wiles enslaved a freeman
to the bondage of your throne.
And on his tawdry court you shed,
as though to do Salome proud,
your seven-veiled shame to shock the crowd:
and, with razored spite, severed my head.
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Labels: poetry
9 Comments:
This is great... reminiscent of Oscar Wilde's Salome...
Gut wrenching. Hard hitting. The reader isn't spared either. Loved it !!
Agree with all the comments above. It brings so many tales of yore and real instances to life.
Almost seems as though Bob Dylan's - Like a Rolling Stone - could be a sequel to your work.
Loved it!
GOD!! It is as if someone has slit my own throat. My dear friend, this is absolutely fabulous. One of your best. -p
Been back to reread this poem many times since you posted it. Like it more with each reading. The metaphor, the emotion.
And got even more depth when i read a certain post elsewhere.
Read it again! All I can say is - UNCANNY!
A prophet of poets art thou with thee lyrics !
A shiver ran down my spine as I read this. You have packaged this poem with so much intensity - I even had to move away from my screen at the end! Agree with Peter: the more you read this, the more it hits you.
you have surpassed yourself speck!
...and i want to read what zig read elsewhere!
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