The Eternal Struggle
but your thoughts are galaxies away
and I struggle pathetically
with electric eels of feelings
that refuse to be bundled and strapped
for words make such brittle ropes.
You say love is a confusing emotion
and I shrug my shoulders philosophically,
how I wish the tongue muscles would finally
stop vibrating on their own -
isn't nearness enough?
If someone ever makes a bonfire of lexicons
I will be there, chucking my mind into it.
Flinging words against a torrent of words,
we keep trying to squeeze the juice
out of this desiccated fruit
of this lethargic relationship.
(c) Max Babi January 2005
Labels: poetry
3 Comments:
a bonfire of lexicons...
this poem sure underlines that fact that over communicating in a relationship can sometimes be detrimental to it... ???
but i could not understand the words:
If someone ever makes a bonfire of lexicons
I will be there, chucking my mind into it.
what i could understand was, "if someone decides to throw away word-chests, i shall throw my mind in, so i never have to search for an opportune word at an awkward time between me and my beau/.." would this be accurate?
utekkare,
pranay
words make such brittle ropes...waah waah..mazaa aa gaya captain..
Hi Max,
was browsing when i came by your poem
"words make such brittle ropes"--so true...
"You look at me steadily
but your thoughts are galaxies away"--so beautifully expressed.
would love to read more of your poetry
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