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10 November, 2004

Today

I overslept
Dreaming of slithering snakes hissing and racing horses
Black snakes and white horses
Two black snakes and a white horse.
I thought Ka was a yellow python and Bagheera a black panther and thought they were friends,
But this war of snakes and horses
Leaves me tired, torn
I will wake up early from now on.

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Blogger Max Babi said...

hey Nisha,
An interesting piece here,
but then I am a sucker for dreams
and poems abt them... on the whole
it makes a good impact but I guess,
you could do away with the line
Two black snakes and a white horse...

cheers

10 November, 2004 22:26  
Blogger Alex said...

Thanks Max... actually this was a reponse to that 'verbal callisthenics' post...

11 November, 2004 11:27  

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