Another Shy Young Poet....
Slip
Slip
Slipping away
Going down
My body
From my head
To my shoulders
Down my torso
To my feet
Going down
Slipping away...
And I have
This apathy
To hold on!!
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3 Comments:
Hmm...interesting...but Max who would want to hold on to apathy? And is it the same person as before?
max this is nice...
Shy poet should lift the veil...
Susmita
hi anil,
Hope max doesnt mind me answering this.
maybe i didnt word my poem correctly anil, therefore you interpret that i would want to hold on to apathy.
I wanted to say that i had an apathy to hold onto what was slipping away from me...
thanks for the comments,
regards,
lavannya
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